这篇主要介绍了体育运动、流行音乐、网络游戏,具体兴趣描述、场景化表达、情感联结建立的表述比较清楚,可以直接参考。
i""m very happy to come here tos tudy with you.
this classf eels just like a big family to me.
i""m interested in sport,pop music.i also enjoy playing game sonnet . i would love to play with you sometime.
i hope i can be come your friend soon and make our dreams come true to gether.
这篇说的是父母影响英语学习、海外短期学习提升沟通能力、希望拓展英语文学知识。用具体场景说明兴趣、以经历支撑观点、用目标体现态度这部分值得借鉴。
I am ___. I was born in Changsha. I graduate from senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.
In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.
I think language is very interesting. I could e_press one substance by using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.
这篇介绍的是书包被压后扔笔袋、青色象征自由快乐、愿意做朋友的邀请。具体事例说明、情绪表达真实、结尾互动提问写得比较自然。
everyone is good, i should be more obedient, i like green, blue in my heart is a symbol of freedom, happiness and loveliness. i won"t be furious when i"m angry, but i just face it.
remember again, my deskmate clashed with another classmate, my deskmate fell in my bag, my bag is pressed by him, i was very angry, picked up his pen to fling caution to the winds and threw all of a sudden, pencil, pen, ruler of the fly.
look at it! i can lose my temper in some times, but most of the time will be very obedient. are you willing to be my friend?
大家好,我应该算比较听话,我喜欢青色,青色在我的心里象征着自由、快乐和可爱。我生气的时候不会大发雷霆,只会从容不迫的面对。
记得又一次,我的同桌和另外一个同学发生了冲突,我的同桌一下子倒在我的书包上面,我的书包被他压着,我十分生气,不顾一切的拿起他的笔袋往地上扔去,一下子,铅笔、钢笔、尺子满天飞。
看吧!我有的时候也会发脾气,不过大多数的时间都会很听话很听话,你们愿意做我的朋友吗?